After reaching the deadline for the short film we realised that towards the end of our film an editing error had occurred in relation to the credits as the end. We have now made alterations and our film has been re-uploaded to the blog in this post.
We're currently marking the work. Currently, the film would achieve high level 3. We advise making some improvements in the final window of time allowed: - try to smooth out the editing in the opening transitions - there are continuity gaps in a couple of transitions - there are some sound glitches which you should try to iron out. For example, in the later parts of the film on the bus, we can hear ambient chat, which appears to be an error. Can you also tweak the collision sound so that it exactly matches the hit? Also, the roundabout scene sound is very uneven - can you look at whether this can be improved? The titling works well, but we think it could be more noticeable - is it possible to keep it on screen for longer, or make it a fraction larger? Or change the colour to make it stand out more? -
We're currently marking the work. Currently, the film would achieve high level 3. We advise making some improvements in the final window of time allowed:
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- there are some sound glitches which you should try to iron out. For example, in the later parts of the film on the bus, we can hear ambient chat, which appears to be an error. Can you also tweak the collision sound so that it exactly matches the hit? Also, the roundabout scene sound is very uneven - can you look at whether this can be improved?
The titling works well, but we think it could be more noticeable - is it possible to keep it on screen for longer, or make it a fraction larger? Or change the colour to make it stand out more?
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